Showing posts with label Words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Words. Show all posts

Friday, 18 May 2018

Words to stir the soul

Victoria Erickson
Poet || Dreamer || Writing coach || Beauty seeker 
Weaving words like a vivid tapestry, Erickson reaches into the soul and invites us to swim in an ocean of hope, choosing love and aliveness over fear and resistance. Equal parts old soul and starry-eyed child, she encourages us to find the depth and meaning within our everyday lives, reminding us to stay true to our own paths while embracing both the pain and the beauty at the heart of reality. Keep this book close as a timeless reminder that wonder is everywhere. Your daily cup of universe.


Love and light,
Trace
xoxo

Thursday, 6 April 2017

Beautiful Nature

Beautiful photography by Rudi Moerkl.
My mind could live in this space forever ~ I want to jump in. ;o) 


Flowers adorn twisted trees

in salmon pinks, lilac, and muted leaves

like miniature sunsets 

opaque against a fading peridot sky

as above

so below

my soul found heaven upon a knowe

Love and light,
Trace
xoxo

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

Writing Style...

A kind reviewer, via Goodreads, mentioned that she liked my 'writing style' and this prompted me to blog a post concerning 'The Voice' of an author. Further down, I've provided links to websites with more information. Enjoy. :o) 
A writer's style is what sets his or her writing apart and makes it unique. Style is the way writing is dressed up (or down) to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience. Word choice, sentence fluency, and the writer's voice — all contribute to the style of a piece of writing.
In fiction writing, the style must represent the author's personal expression of these events that comprise the plot; setting the mood, and leading the reader to a subjective, non-literal, emotional understanding of the subject.

How a writer chooses words and structures sentences to achieve a certain effect is also an element of style. When Thomas Paine wrote “These are the times that try men’s souls,” he arranged his words to convey a sense of urgency and desperation. Had he written “These are bad times,” it’s likely he wouldn’t have made such an impact!
Style is usually considered to be the province of literary writers. Novelists such as Ernest Hemingway and William Faulkner and poets such as Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman are well known for their distinctive literary styles.
Elements of style
Many elements of writing contribute to an author’s style, but three of the most important are word choice, sentence fluency, and voice.
WORD CHOICE
Good writers are concise and precise, weeding out unnecessary words and choosing the exact word to convey meaning. Precise words — active verbs, concrete nouns, specific adjectives — help the reader visualize the sentence. Good writers use adjectives sparingly and adverbs rarely, letting their nouns and verbs do the work.
Good writers also choose words that contribute to the flow of a sentence. Polysyllabic words, alliteration, and consonance can be used to create sentences that roll off the tongue. Onomatopoeia and short, staccato words can be used to break up the rhythm of a sentence.
SENTENCE FLUENCY
Sentence fluency is the flow and rhythm of phrases and sentences. Good writers use a variety of sentences with different lengths and rhythms to achieve different effects. They use parallel structures within sentences and paragraphs to reflect parallel ideas, but also know how to avoid monotony by varying their sentence structures.
Good writers also arrange their ideas within a sentence for greatest effect. They avoid loose sentences, deleting extraneous words and rearranging their ideas for effect. Many students initially write with a looser oral style, adding words on to the end of a sentence in the order they come to mind. This rambling style is often described as a “word dump” where everything in a student’s mind is dumped onto the paper in no particular order. There is nothing wrong with a word dump as a starting point: the advantage of writing over speaking is that writers can return to their words, rethink them, and revise them for effect. Tighter, more readable style results when writers choose their words carefully, delete redundancies, make vague words more specific, and use subordinate clauses and phrases to rearrange their ideas for the greatest effect.
VOICE
Because voice is difficult to measure reliably, it is often left out of scoring formulas for writing tests. Yet voice is an essential element of style that reveals the writer’s personality. A writer’s voice can be impersonal or chatty, authoritative or reflective, objective or passionate, serious or funny.

Source  HERE
Tone vs. Voice
Anything you write should still have your voice: something that makes your writing sound uniquely like you. A personal conversation with a friend differs from a speech given to a large group of strangers. Just as you speak to different people in different ways yet remain yourself, so the tone of your writing can vary with the situation while the voice -- the essential, individual thoughts and expression -- is still your own.
Links:
1. A Simple Exercise to Find Your Writing Style ~ HERE
2. What’s Your Creative Writing Style? Tips for Developing Your Voice ~ HERE
It can take years for a writer to develop a stylistic voice. Some writers have a natural voice. Others work at crafting a unique voice with a particular tone or attitude. And plenty of writers don’t think about voice at all. But voice is a key element of writing since it represents you as a writer and can help readers connect with your work. For example, some readers will be turned off by a sarcastic tone whereas others may be drawn to it.

Creative Writing ~ HERE

I don't think about 'voice' when writing, but I am aware of tone. In general, I feel reality, day-to-day tasks require a different form (tone) of self and I usually need to get into that 'writing-mode' before I put any words down. If I didn't do this the 'tone' would be different. Does that make sense?
I block out the world and create a mental sphere (bubble) where I draw in and keep a flow of inspiration/creativity around me. Initially, I do this with images and music (headphones on). Depending on the day, it can take minutes or hours to find that balance, but once found the word count moves up. Yay! :o)
What works for you?
Are you aware of 'Voice' or 'Tone'?
 In My Bubble by Love-and-Blades

Love and light,
Trace
xoxo

Thursday, 7 April 2016

Sunday, 25 October 2015

Soul Searching...

Seeking Connection

Photography by Lena Petersen

The Flower of karmic cycles - Voror

The flower of Vororbla (of karma) is called Voror. 
A sacred flower that produces a carpet of purple in the beautiful otherworldly gardens of Calageata. In Norse mythology, a vǫrðr ("warden," "watcher" or "caretaker") is a warden spirit believed to follow, from birth to death, the soul of every person. At times the warden can reveal itself as a small light or shape of a being - in the book they are known as the elemental Sindria.

A Voror flower fully bloomed represents 
full enlightenment and self-awareness.

Section of lyrics (chorus) from a song written for the book inspired by

'Keep your light bright
So that I might see through the mists,
and once again we can look upon a carpet of purple flowers
Keep your light bright
So that our souls may meet again in your little piece of heaven
Keep your light bright'

(More HERE)

Book Character 

Her little piece of heaven - a visual meditation  (Book one), usually a place of unseen existence that higher souls and deities reside, outside the tangible world. Humans give this otherworldly place many names, but Bea refers to it as heaven.


The Agnaya (Ag-naya) means male energy (Yang)  
The Aniya (A-niya) means female energy (Yin)

 Ameusouya ( Am-e-us-ou-ya ) means complete/whole (you, me, us ~ one)

The complete story of 'Vororbla' will be told over three books.

1. A Carpet of Purple Flowers    ~ Beginning (Released 19th Oct' 2015) Bea's Story
2. Awake in Purple Dreams        ~ Middle      (In progress 2015 - 2016)    Bea's Story
3. The Purple Book of Menteith ~ End            (2017)

4. The Butterfly Bridge               ~ Pre-history

Photography by Marie Hochhaus

love and light
Trace
xoxo

Sunday, 12 April 2015

Goodread Author Quotes

Goodread Author Quotes

“For love is a celestial harmony
Of likely hearts compos'd of stars' concent,
Which join together in sweet sympathy,
To work each other's joy and true content,
Which they have harbour'd since their first descent
Out of their heavenly bowers, where they did see
And know each other here belov'd to be.”
Edmund Spenser

“There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind.”
C.S. Lewis

“You have to write the book that wants to be written. And if the book will be too difficult for grown-ups, then you write it for children.” 
― Madeleine L'Engle

“No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.” 
― Robert Frost

“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.” 
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

“Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens.” 
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

“You can never get a cup of tea large enough or a book long enough to suit me.” 
― C.S. Lewis

“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” 
― Oscar Wilde

“You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
Love like you'll never be hurt,
Sing like there's nobody listening,
And live like it's heaven on earth.” 
― William W. Purkey

“A room without books is like a body without a soul.” 
― Marcus Tullius Cicero

“No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.” 
― Eleanor Roosevelt, This is My Story

“If you want to know what a man's like, take a good look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.” 
― J.K. Rowling, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire

“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” 
― Maya Angelou

“To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.” 
― Ralph Waldo Emerson

“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” 
― H. Jackson Brown Jr., P.S. I Love You

love and light
Trace
xoxo


Friday, 10 April 2015

A woman of contradictions, made up of patch-worked love.

Who is Bethany, anyway?

She's the little girl that lives deep within a woman's heart.
The inner child, who, at times, can be haunted by self-doubt.
She's the quietness in all the in betweens.
A soon to be butterfly, awaiting transformation. 
In sleep, she heard a whispered promise, offering a path of safe flight.
Bethany, a delicate flower, seeking a nurturing ray of light.
She's imperfectly, perfect, made up of uniquely patch-worked love. 
Her delicate heart, a whimsical gathering of lingering hopes
 entwined with the forgotten desire of rekindling, love's lost dream.

She's no-one special
and yet, is everything
 Dreams swim in her morning tea
 She's an ordinary woman
with a kind and open heart
She loves to read and
to daydream of 'What if's?'
 She's a woman with weaknesses
She doesn't believe in life's perfections
but keeps natures promise of truth in her heart
 She twiddles with her hair when in thought
She's the woman that has cried herself to sleep...
A woman that's laughed until tears streamed from her eyes... a seeker of sunlight happy
...and a seeker of the hidden moon in the sky of the setting sun...
She believes in something more...
 yet, remains still
She's a woman who grows her hair...
as change means something new and that frightens her
She's petal fragile, but her spark is stronger than the brightest diamond
She's naturally beautiful in layers and comfortable clothes, pretty accessories too.
She s a woman that can't cook...
but loves homemade food
A woman with only one dear friend,
placing an invisible wall before other possibilities...
She longs to be held in arms of unacquainted love
but also fears the fall into the deepest depths of her heart...
She fears loss, yet grasps at fleeting elements of hope in the same thin air...
Try and catch her thoughts, a disappearing mirage
 She's carefree and prefers to stay home
She lives to work, but hates routine...
Bethany :o) 
love and light
Trace
xoxo

Tuesday, 31 March 2015

A Carpet of Purple Flowers - Haiku

Haiku



~1~
In Calageata
The Sindria 'well of souls'
Hides in purple haze


~2~
He, The 'Heaven Stone' 
Wearing a black hooded shroud
Quiet observer


~3~
A scent fills the breeze
On hills of purple flowers
Brings him to his knees


~4~
The moon upon us
as we lay on purple buds
Hearts open to love


love and light
Trace
xoxo